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In 666 Ways
Contributed by
bleeding_chains
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Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 11:06:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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In 666 ways I hate you
You cut me and scar me
You make me bleed
So much I’m suffocating
In my mist of fear from you
You hate me so much
It turns into a passion
An art of a knife
Dripping with blood
Paint over me
I’m not alive
I’m your living doll
Produced by hate and lived by greed
You reel me in and spit me out
In 666 ways I hate you
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2004-04-10 11:06:22]
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Re: In 666 Ways
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by emphaticplacebo on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 11:27:39 AM AEST
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great write: brutally honest and emotional. Relaying what you feel on the inside is hard to say the least, and youve written in a way to do your feelings justice, well done!
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Re: In 666 Ways
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 11:30:37 AM AEST
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Ouch... I can feel your pain and the sadness.
Good vent,and a great write. |
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Re: In 666 Ways
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:06:53 PM AEST
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| oh...this is so, so amazing...wow... |
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