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beautiful tragedy
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
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this is just a beautiful tragedy,
this is my honour,
the honour of knowing you,
if only you knew the pain i endure..
and i would like to thank you,
for being so special,
for keeping me alive,
but i seem to die when you hurt,
your pain is killing me inside,
and i know one day i will break,
and tell you how i feel,
but right now i must keep this in my heart,
because it would kill you to know the thoughts that dwell inside,
and i want to thank you,
for being so great,
for caring so much,
for loving me this way,
i love you...
and this is all my pain,
and this is all your pain,
my heart filled with this pain,
just the same as yours...
i love you...
do you love me too?
because you can save me,
you're the only one who can save me,
i cant breathe when i think of the fact that you're not by my side,
its more painful than any physical pain and hurt that i could possibly feel,
like a hammer strike at my heart,
and i must leave you now,
and you must never see how much love i have in this frail shell,
but i want you to know,
i would die for your pain if you would let me...
beautiful tragedy....
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Re: beautiful tragedy
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:40:24 AM AEST
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Your heart on a page........a spellbinding, highly emotional write.
Very well done
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Re: beautiful tragedy
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:40:54 AM AEST
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| what a beautiful, honest write.... I enjoyed reading, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: beautiful tragedy
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by face-in-the-crowd on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:44:45 AM AEST
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| That is such a beatiful poem! I really felt that one. Great job! |
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Re: beautiful tragedy
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:59:30 AM AEST
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| this is so beautiful...this is just how i feel about my best friend... |
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Re: beautiful tragedy
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by bleeding_chains on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 11:09:03 AM AEST
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| this is an excellent poem. i really do like this one. |
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Re: beautiful tragedy
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by LiquidChaos on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 11:17:44 AM AEST
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awesome. this is exactly how i feel right now. and it sucks not being able to let the one you care about what you're feeling. hold on. great write!
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Re: beautiful tragedy
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by emphaticplacebo on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 11:27:33 AM AEST
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| beautiful write! I can totally relate to this poem, its just so well written and deep with heartfelt emotion.. I have felt this way before, and you really do this sort of feeling justice, well done! |
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Re: beautiful tragedy
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 11:33:05 AM AEST
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| Wonderful write. Your emotions written with clarity. |
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Re: beautiful tragedy
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by JadedExistence on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:50:20 PM AEST
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Absolutely amazing, brilliant, beautiful, wonderful, and everything else that has already been mentioned.
~JadedExistence~ |
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Re: beautiful tragedy
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:31:11 AM AEST
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| You've spilled out your heart in this poem and that has made it all the more emotional and heartwrenching to read. Excellent write. |
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Re: beautiful tragedy
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:29:27 PM AEST
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Lost,
This is so touching. I know this feeling. You want so badly to take the pain. You would swallow it like a pill even if it killed you. A really deep and meaningful write.
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Re: beautiful tragedy
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by arden on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:18:27 AM AEST
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oh my god... i am at a loss for words.
this was so beautiful and sad... i loved this.
just perfect. well done, keep it up because you have a great talent.
Arden |
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