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Why would you do this to me?
Contributed by
luckycharm
on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 08:28:05 AM in AEST
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I'm sitting here crying,
Cause I believed something,
And found out it was not true,
I try to save myself,
From getting invovled,
In anything else you have planned,
To pull on me,
You say it was all a joke,
But when u knew I liked,
My crush so bad,
You lied and put words in his mouth,
That hurts me so bad,
And now I sit here in tears,
I look in the mirror,
At myself ,
I cry more,
You told me you talked to him,
But that was a lie,
And then u told me another lie,
Which makes me more mad,
I thought you were my friend,
I'm not mad,
It's the fact,
That you could not tell,
Your friend the truth,
You say we should not talk anymore,
But you tell me the truth,
In your own words,
I'm trying to fix the situation,
Cause you are like a sister to me,
And this is what you do to me,
So now I don't know what to do,
Cause he may be thinkng,
I don't like him no more,
And other people may be thinking,
I said something wrong,
Which is not true,
Let me ask you a question,
What if you were in my shoes?,
You would not talk to me,
But see you messed up,
And know you have to face,
Me now,
You don't know how much,
This hurts me on the inside,
I mean people have emotions these days,
And I have emotions that,
Are feeling like pain,
Inside of the heart,
So all I wan't to know is,
Why would u do this to me?
Copyright ©
luckycharm
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2004-04-10 08:28:05]
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Re: Why would you do this to me?
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by silent on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 08:35:10 AM AEST
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Very well described pain, ;)
Very nice flow as well, really draws you in.
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Re: Why would you do this to me?
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:55:27 AM AEST
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i feel your pain lucky. its a very well wrote poem that conveys your pain to perfection. well done and i hope all goes well for you
love and hugs
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Re: Why would you do this to me?
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 01:09:07 PM AEST
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((PAM)) Wow, I knew you were upset but I guess I didnt realize how bad she hurt you. I am so sorry for everything that happened. I wish there was something I could do to make it better. Nonetheless, this was a very deep emotional poem and it tugged at my heart. Thanks for sharing
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Re: Why would you do this to me?
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by New_York_Chick on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 08:44:13 PM AEST
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hey girl
i dunno if u remember how i told you to be carefull about what you tell your friends?
it doesn't matter anyway i just wish i could make you feel better
very nice work |
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