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romeo and juliet as my teachers

Contributed by vanity on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 07:43:05 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Paul and Katrina
As
Romeo and Juliet

Paul went love searching as it was his life’s duty
He got struck by something a light bolt of beauty
In his eyes she was his forthcoming queen
The most fairest and prettiest of the teachers he’d seen

They were meant to be together he was convinced it was a fact
Whenever she would pass by his heart would try to attract
But somewhere in his compassion he knew that he would fail
Because she was forbidden and her empathy was not for sale

What would he do now that his destiny came to and end
But he was still indomitable that to her his heart would send
He tried lots of pick up lines but to all in vale
He needed something else his words seemed kind of stale

He sent her lots of flowers but he never wrote his name
She thought the message was sweet and that the flowers were oh so lame
His heart would start to bleed whenever his grace would appear
His words would melt like ice whenever her scent would seem so near

To her he oh so wanted to speak
But whenever she would walk by his blood and poise turned weak
His mouth were oh so dry as if it were to burst
But all he desires now is Katrina to quench his thirst

His feelings would leak as would from yearning
His valour would cascade as the hours of time kept turning
He tried to drop a hint by treating her like a saint
He didn’t profess his love because he knew he were to faint

The most emotive thing was she loved him to
Phillipa then said madam have you forgotten Pauline’s forbidden him from you
I wouldn’t have fallen in love if it caused this much pain
My love is imprisoned by my emotion I have to keep my feelings under sustain

Help me I’m trapped I need a key
Everyone listen by life belongs to me
Leave thou and thee and let us be

Copyright Â© vanity ... [ 2004-04-10 07:43:05]
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Re: romeo and juliet as my teachers (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 09:48:17 AM AEST
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Well done , I thoroughly enjoyed this poem.

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