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Open
Contributed by
silent
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Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 06:45:31 AM in AEST
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You are so open, just like me
Within you i cannot see
Much at all, just fall
Within your feelings, handing you a flirtaous rope
To climb out of your hole, feeding my mind
Is the ultimate goal
Not caring or wanting anything from you
Except pain and suffering, how selfish i am
I keep myself open for you, for everyone in fact
The more you read, the more correctly you see
I feed your insight and nochalance
I know you can see me
Just like a drug, the fix you crave
I'll help dig, just like your grave
Copyright ©
silent
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2004-04-10 06:45:31]
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Re: Open
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by Chade on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 07:28:27 AM AEST
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| This poem has many meanings and has made me think about my life. It is also very well written and convays many images. |
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Re: Open
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 08:54:31 AM AEST
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This is so good. I love the flirtatious rope and climbing out of your hole, feeding my mind. I have had relationships like this. They are a fix. So very addictive. You have said this so adroitly.
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Re: Open
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 09:29:11 AM AEST
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Excellent, so deeply emotional.
Very well done
Roses
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Re: Open
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 09:35:50 AM AEST
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| I liked it, very thought-provoking and you used very nice metaphors there as well. |
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Re: Open
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:49:21 PM AEST
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Again silent, this is absolutely amazing. You have quite the talent my friend. I cant wait to see what else is in store. :)
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Re: Open
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by arden on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 02:44:30 PM AEST
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ohhh creepy and chilling. this was awesome! your talent is just amazing. loved this.
Arden |
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Re: Open
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:54:06 PM AEST
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| captivating:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Open
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 11:05:38 PM AEST
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WoW I Liked This...It Was A Very Chilling Write.But Written Very Well Keep Em Coming.
********LoVe**AnGeL*********
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