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Endless pain
Contributed by
silent
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Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 05:45:39 AM in AEST
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Tears unknown from a lonely soul
Drifting clouds part with sunshine red
Gazing mindset wanders into pools of loss
Drowning into you
For I breathe your forgotten love
It whispers every breath I take
Your eyes haunt my dreams
In Happiness I awake, feeling you so close to me
Only for a fleeting moment, until reality finally grips control
Trapped in a well of darkness
Scrambling, clutching with bleeding hands
Fighting for a way out of this madness
But I through thoughtless stupidity have driven you away
Into the arms of another lover you will stay
Torn to shreds as my depression draws me in
To a life of drinking, and pleasurable sin
To take away so much pain
Eyes staring blankly ahead as I wish for sweet death
Looking forward to lifes pleasures i do not anymore
Since without you I have not one with which to share
Staring out into the deep blue sea
Whispering so sweetly, calling to me
Can’t you hear it, see its beauty
My heart also aches for another, which I have lost
My feet gently lift from the unfeeling floor
Walking to the cliff, sunset so beautiful
Looking down over the edge
Before the height takes my life I give you this unheard lonely pledge
You have stolen my soul
Bleeding I slowly step
Your eyes I see in the depths of my watery demise
Clouding my thoughts
As I leap forward once again into the essence of you…….
Copyright ©
silent
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2004-04-10 05:45:39]
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Re: Endless pain
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by bernard on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 06:06:10 AM AEST
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| Good strong poem. I enjoyed the read, Thanks |
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Re: Endless pain
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by Chade on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 06:07:57 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful insight into the world of pain and the fact that pain will never leave. Well done |
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Re: Endless pain
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 09:51:07 AM AEST
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ouch.......heartbreaking write. Nothing eats at the soul like the one whose face never leaves our minds even though ours is just a dim, meaningless memory in thiers.
Very well done
Roses
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Re: Endless pain
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:47:57 PM AEST
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Oh silent, I just wanna give you a hug. That was absolutely brilliantly written and just amazingly full of emotions I didnt know could be captured in a poem. Especially in that many words. Wow. breath-taking, heart-breaking, exceptional write. :)
Lindsey |
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Re: Endless pain
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by reilt on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:53:37 PM AEST
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| wow what an amazing poem...achingly beautiful |
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Re: Endless pain
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by arden on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 02:41:47 PM AEST
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whoa...this is so sad and full of pain. this was just amazing to read. so deep and full of emotion. just awesome. loved this.
Becky |
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Re: Endless pain
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:59:42 PM AEST
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| absolutely beautifully breathtaking and heartwrenching..... hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Endless pain
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:59:25 PM AEST
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Hearwrenchingly empty. All I could do to get through it breathing and not crying.
Stitch |
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Re: Endless pain
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 04:20:42 AM AEST
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I really like this one. It was very well written, from your soul. Simply beautiful.
Take care.
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