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Dissolution
Contributed by
spike
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Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:04:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Time passes, relinquishing heat,
And promises marinated in love/lust
First fade then crumble, dust to dust.
Was it in your eyes?
A reflection in a dim corridor
-that wandering look.
Dull kisses stab the senses,
Giving sight to the blind
A listless touch rakes soft flesh,
Passionless embraces
Crush life from the newborn.
Foetal postures only delay
The inevitable disembowelment
Save the martyred poses for stage and screen
-let life bleed on the carpet.
‘He who lets himself be whipped,
Deserves to be whipped’ Masoch declared,
And again we plead not to be spared.
Copyright ©
spike
... [
2004-04-10 00:04:02]
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Re: Dissolution
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by hotrod55 on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:44:46 AM AEST
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cool poem Spike, keep up the work please
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Re: Dissolution
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 01:00:11 AM AEST
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| Powerful poem, I like the quote you inserted at the end. Another great poem from you :) |
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Re: Dissolution
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 01:49:18 PM AEST
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That was just one hell of a write. Such expression!! Outstanding!
very, very well done
Roses, many roses
Larry |
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