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Forever
Contributed by
faithmairee
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Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:06:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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this could be the love that lasts forever
or it could be the one that ends tonight
at this moment as your eyes look directly at me
i feel just tender feelings for you as you take me in your arms
and lean so close to me
i can not help but think
you are the one for me
but you don't say much
of anything at all
tonight i feel your heart
is mine forever but when tomorrow comes i'll go back to wondering
if this is love to you
or just a fling
Copyright ©
faithmairee
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2004-04-09 22:06:14]
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Re: Forever
(User Rating: 1 )
by morelikelyrics on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:18:47 PM AEST
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How painful it is to be lost among the thin line of true love, or simple pleasure...
true emotions expressed and thought clearly inspiring...
I enjoyed this write, keep it going...
~let life be your lyrical song, everyday's the words, every year is a verse, because in the end, there is no 'repeat'~
-Morelikelyrics |
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Re: Forever
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 02:07:28 PM AEST
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sigh...it's tough not knowing huh... good write...
Jenni |
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