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If Not For You
Contributed by
lizabeth283
on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 08:59:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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If not for you
Who knows where I’d be
A self-loathing girl
That was formerly me
I hated myself
And all that I’d done
Twenty years in a battle
Satan just about won
I’d given up trying
To be what I’m not
Then you came in my life
Helping me find what I sought
To me you have given
The ultimate gift
By showing me love
You have mended the rift
I can look at tomorrow
With a smile on my face
Knowing someday we’ll meet
In that heavenly place
I used to be no one
But now that’s not true
I owe my self-worth
To my love, that is you
Copyright ©
lizabeth283
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2004-04-09 20:59:36]
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Re: If Not For You
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 09:26:20 PM AEST
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this is a really really good poem!
I luved ur rhyming!
*good write*
*XoXoXo* |
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Re: If Not For You
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 09:59:04 PM AEST
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Beautiful and heartfelt.
And your rhyme was excellent.
Blessings.
Andrew |
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Re: If Not For You
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by burdened on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:05:30 PM AEST
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the only think i can do is smile.
*smile*
not a bad thing, i assure you. :)
this poem is beautiful.
very touching. |
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Re: If Not For You
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 01:49:48 AM AEST
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Beautiful tribute.....loved this...I'm glad you met this person...
Jenni |
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Re: If Not For You
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by afraid_of_fear on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 11:39:28 AM AEST
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what a wonderful dedication.. beautiful..
charlotte x_x_x |
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