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In Golden Mist Fallen…
Contributed by
fionndruinne
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Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 08:58:39 PM in AEST
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Afar in the East
When the shining sun rose
In golden mist
Tall were the towers
Of faraway palaces
Of the Golden Isle.
Bright as a sun
From the sea they rose
Piercing the fog
Like heart’s delight
Like the gulls’ keen cry
Was the Golden Isle.
On the edges of sight
Were her havens
Where tall fair ships
Came and went
With the keen cold wind
That blew in the Golden Isle.
Tall were her warriors
Bright-eyed and fell
Like stars their spearheads
When they went to war
In the Wide Lands
Singing of the Golden Isle.
Strange were the songs
That came to us
Like sun on polished stone
And the glitter of gold
In the sundered speech
Of the Golden Isle.
But darkness fell
Over that sunlit land
And the hearts of her kings
Were black as jet
And shadow tarnished
The Golden Isle.
Cold was the night
Bitter the wind
We longed for the day
But when the sun rose
There was no light
From the Golden Isle.
Keen now the cry
Of the wayward gulls
Whose home is lost
Alas! It has fallen
In golden mist has gone
The Golden Isle.
Ai Atalantë, laurëa nórë lantaina!
Anar enyalë alcarilya,
Hísiesse laurëa lantaina.
(Alas Atlantis, golden land fallen!
The sun recalls your splendour,
In golden mist fallen.)
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by burdened on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:15:32 PM AEST
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i saw there was no comment on this...and it made me judge the taste of people...(on account of whether or not they had any.)
this poem is beautiful. so chimerical; i love poems such as this. they get me inspired.
thank you. :)
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 03:38:45 AM AEST
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wow! that read like a classic.
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by Baronhawk on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 09:46:08 AM AEST
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A great write on a favourite subject of mine.. the lost lands of Atlantis that great mystery post hence. You have captured herein a distant glimmer and perchance a glance upon the golden isle of Atlantis that vanished lovely lands. Bravo mon ami.. a great write this is to me!
laurëa nórë lantaina! Indeed!
Perchance one of these that I would walk upon those vanished shores....this is a dream I have.
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 05:00:16 PM AEST
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WOW finn... thats all i can muster....wow... that was beautiful. *sigh*
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 05:29:47 PM AEST
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Johnny's right, it did read like a classic. A VERY impressive bit of writing my friend. I find the story of Atlantis fasinating and this held me spellbound!!
Very well done
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by Wachumiri on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 04:13:23 PM AEST
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Mayhaps a bit of Lawhead...
Well written.
Take care,
David |
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 10:10:32 PM AEST
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Such a beautiful poem...great write
Hugs 'n Love
- Becca |
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by arden on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:22:49 PM AEST
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this was beautiful beyond words. the imagery was stunning. just perfect.
loved it.
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 04:52:25 PM AEST
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Love the line about "a shadow tarished." Some lovely images to fly away on here.
Stitch |
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by Kie on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 07:01:18 PM AEST
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Enthralling perfection.
Seriously this poem was excellent.
Kie |
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by jaeann on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:27:41 AM AEST
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| breathtaking.......... |
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:06:50 AM AEST
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Golden shores
On the edge of our dreams
Behold us
Caught in ratio
Bound by fear
May we fly through our dreams
For in here lays our last chance
To find who we really are
A wonderful hymn, flowing, caressing and beautiful.
Keep this up.
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by venkat on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:55:18 AM AEST
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your poem "Celts" I read..this is another beautiful write..I like your poems on classics
venkat
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:22:01 PM AEST
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| Such a beautiful write will stay in our minds forever, that way the city of Atlantis will never be forgotten. Wonderful write, very classical like most have said. Thoroughly enjoyable. |
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by ShadowDaughter on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:03:36 PM AEST
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*stares, dumbstruck*
Well, color me impressed. This is absolutely amazing and the very epitome of what poetry ought to be. I love reading about Atlantis and with this beautiful poem I could almost hear those gulls crying . . .
Wonderfully vivid imagery and pure eloquence. Nicely done.
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 12:58:57 PM AEST
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| uh...wow.... this is beautiful... i cant say much more than that. an amazing poem. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by ShadowDaughter on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:00:18 PM AEST
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Meh . . . . this must be the tenth time (at least) that I've read this and I couldn't resist commenting again.
I love this poem. IloveitIloveitIloveit. It's beautiful, powerful, emotive . . . perfect. I just can't say it enough-- I love this poem!
Lol sorry . . . it's just amazing.
My only gripe with it: WHY haven't you written any more poems since it?!?!?! Hurry up, you :-P.
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 01:50:12 AM AEST
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Atlantis the golden age the golden state's form. A beautiful image you have painted for us in this most excellent work. A wordsmith of great talent. I shall look out for more of your poems. Have you had any work published? your talent is so obvious that I should think that most publishers would be glad of a chance to put your work in print.
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by Black13 on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 06:24:06 PM AEST
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This is almost unexpected from you Andrew.
Please note I said almost.
If I didn't know about your love of swords and the good ol' days...
Very nicely done.
This was a very cool poem.
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 03:11:56 PM AEST
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I read this one before but had no time to comment. Now I shall:
I really like this one. See, I fancy hearing stories about Atlantis...such mystery... Where'd it go?? Just vanish or what?
I like to hear tales like those of Atlantis and what could have happened, what they've found, what they haven't found, what they'd like to find.
Anyway...
This poem is really cool, I love the way you use "Golden" a lot... the whole poem has a "golden" air to it.
Really liked this one.
Love,
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:48:37 PM AEST
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| This is a quality poem an ode and a lasting memory to a world of long ago |
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 03:17:43 PM AEST
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breathtakingly beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:48:11 AM AEST
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| fantastic fantasy... colour fantastic... Loved it... |
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by Tanmaya on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 02:31:10 AM AEST
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Awesome!
This is one of best poems I have read in a long time...
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by Lee on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:36:21 PM AEST
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It's the surreal eel y,know feel
Good imagery and story.
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 07:01:14 PM AEST
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Beautiful..Indeed this is a masterpeace
Will enjoy reeading more of your writes
God Bless! |
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 02:15:45 PM AEST
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This is a brillant write..
I can truly say I love this poem..
God Bless! |
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Re: In Golden Mist Fallen…
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 01:26:06 AM AEST
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Geeze, dude an incredibly sad piece on an end...ending of lives, homes, love, angst. This truly had me from beginning to dying end. Hoo yeah. You did well, A.
* a lone scout gull flies above searching*
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