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A Kitchen Suicide
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 08:53:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Agonizing pain and horrible frustration
fog my mind,
making it impossible to think.
I've screwed things up so bad,
there's no answer but this one.
I lie on the kitchen floor,
drenched in sweat and tears.
This world gave me more than
I could take.
I know that I am weak...
My mind spins out of control,
waves of emotions
consume me.
I take the knife that
rests on the shelf.
I look at its shine,
hypnotizing and beautiful.
I slit my wrists,
bare to the bone.
There's no way I can mess up
this time...
I slit and slit until
the world gets fuzzy.
All I can see is all the
blood and the tears that
mix on the floor.
All the horrific
emotions and memories are
coming back to me.
But only for a fleeting second,
as I pass into the next world.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-04-09 20:53:22]
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Re: A Kitchen Suicide
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 09:30:35 PM AEST
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very emotional and dark
Luved it a lot!
I could really picture what u were saying
Great write
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Re: A Kitchen Suicide
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 01:45:31 AM AEST
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What a horrible scene...well written....Glad it's not gonna happen.
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Re: A Kitchen Suicide
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by TwEeK on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:53:23 PM AEST
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echo first comments
another amazing write,
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