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Living death
Contributed by
Chade
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Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 07:20:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The death of life congealed with death,
Means that the death of death is not always the best.
If life lives on where death is dead, surly that would mean that we are not fed.
For too many people would roam this world and to few food would be found.
So surly with this we would be living in a living death.
Copyright ©
Chade
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2004-04-09 19:20:14] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Living death
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 07:44:54 PM AEST (User
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I found this poem very deep and thought provoking..Gave me chills.....WELL DONE
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Re: Living death
(User Rating: 1 ) by silent on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 07:33:08 AM AEST (User
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:) This rocks, now that's what i call deep thinking, very well done, i love deep poems, they hold the most meaning for me....very well done.
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Re: Living death
(User Rating: 1 ) by little_genna on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:24:08 AM AEST (User
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wow this is incredibly deep and thought provoking. this is the best type of poem. i loved the line "The death of life congealed with death" well done!!
have a good easter!
love and hugs
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Re: Living death
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kirby on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 11:55:58 AM AEST (User
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Like everyone has said before this is really a deep poem and if u sit there and think about it it may just make u think deeply on more things then just this. Really kewl poem and keep em coming!Love:::Kirby |
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