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Night
Contributed by
Chade
on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 06:04:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Night falls,
Death calls.
Hope seaks,
Life weeps.
We sleep in an eternal deep.
Copyright ©
Chade
... [
2004-04-09 18:04:30] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: Night
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 06:11:01 PM AEST (User
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Short and sweet... i like it |
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Re: Night
(User Rating: 1 ) by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 08:59:11 PM AEST (User
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What a powerful write... I am truley amazed... It's so short, yet sends such a strong message. You possess quite a talent! Great job! |
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Re: Night
(User Rating: 1 ) by MandiMay on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:26:01 PM AEST (User
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I really liked it i gave it a 4 |
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Re: Night
(User Rating: 1 ) by wray on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 10:09:14 AM AEST (User
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This piece works just so damn well. It rings so true too, scary stuff. It just hit me how some poetry connects you to others, it makes you realise that you're not alone in your lonely feelings after all. The final line was magic. |
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