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I love Him
Contributed by
badboyzlover
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Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 05:58:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I love him soo much
yet he dont even notice me
He knows my name
I see him all the time
He think he knows me, but he dont
He thinks I want him, but I dont
I love him because he's not like everyone eles
I do not want him
I do not need him
He's just seems to make me laugh
He makes me feel good about my self
He's not like everyone eles
He's Tim
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2004-04-09 17:58:31]
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Re: I love Him
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by face-in-the-crowd on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 06:05:11 PM AEST
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| Nice write, I like it! It sounds to me like you're going back and forth like 'I love him, I love him not. I love him, I love him not.' I've done that about guys too! |
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Re: I love Him
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 06:13:09 PM AEST
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Lovely poem.
Well done |
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Re: I love Him
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by Thumper0719 on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:40:20 PM AEST
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| Your poem remands me so much of my friend and this kid Tim who lives down the street! Cool! and good write. |
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