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Breeze
Contributed by
insane_outsider
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Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 05:51:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Have you ever stopped to listen to a soft breeze? When the leaves in the tree tops rustle a faint voice, strangling wind chimes dangle and flutter so despertly.
Have you ever paused to watch a subtle breeze? dusty foliage floating full of life, but to no where special; revealing trealing treasures and covering secrets, a soft, subtle breeze.
Have you ever stopped to listen to a soft breeze? When the leaves in the tree tops rustle a faint voice, strangling wind chimes dangle and flutter so despertly.
Have you ever paused to watch a subtle breeze? dusty foliage floating full of life, but to no where special; revealing trealing treasures and covering secrets.
have you ever tasted a magnificent breeze? open your mouth and dry your tongue, who cares, it's always fun.
have you ever felt a gentle breeze? you want to freeze in place, just to feel it roll off your face; close your eyes, and feel your pulse race. a soft, sublte breeze.
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Re: Breeze
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by morelikelyrics on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 05:58:31 PM AEST
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well the words are worth reading twice...
I can picture myself outside with the breeze passing by...
Very descriptive and enjoyable...
I also liked the unique style in which this was written...
~let life be your lyrical song, everyday's the words, every year is a verse, because in the end, there is no 'repeat'~
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Re: Breeze
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 06:15:07 PM AEST
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| Well done . I can almost feel this breeze apon my cheek. |
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