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Analyze This
Contributed by
parkman
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Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 04:50:31 PM in AEST
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Come in feel free, to look around
My chamber of horrors, you have found
Be afraid, there's no escape
Into my mind, you did break
Hear my demons, rant at you
Cursing, telling you what to do
Feel yourself shiver, as you try to flee
There's no escape, once your inside of me
Telling you truths, or telling you lies
It's up to you, to analyze
Dig deep, as deep as you can
Into the darkness, of this man
I know your scared, you're getting to close
Am I a parasite, am I the host
There's no escaping, from this unpure cyst
Analyze this, Mr psychiatrist
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Re: Analyze This
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by morelikelyrics on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 05:10:04 PM AEST
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unbelievably... chilling
yet... clever...
Reminds me of a few years ago when I had a case of depression. My friends suggested I get some help, go see a psychiartist or something. I never did, I wondered what another man could do to help my mental illness. This summarizes perfectly that feeling. |
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Re: Analyze This
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by face-in-the-crowd on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 05:25:57 PM AEST
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| I'm speechless. I guess all I have to say is you did an amazing job! Nice work! |
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Re: Analyze This
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 06:17:18 PM AEST
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Interesting write...
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Re: Analyze This
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by silent on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 08:28:38 PM AEST
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LMAO, that was cool, i can relate perfectly, this poem is wickedly good, thanks for sharing, i agree analyse this buddy......
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Re: Analyze This
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 09:05:02 PM AEST
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| Hehehe... great poem! I recently had to see a shrink... I REEEEAAAAALLLLLYYYYY appreciate this poem, lol. I especially liked the last sentence or two. Look forward to reading more! |
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Re: Analyze This
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 03:08:12 AM AEST
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| A wonderful unique poem. Dark and chilling. Amazing write. |
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