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Pictured Inspiration
Contributed by
morelikelyrics
on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 04:24:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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She was Kodak moment,
She was a friend I'll never forget,
But right now,
She's looking like the love of my life...
And that's okay, I'm alright with that.
Everday's the canvas, and living is the page,
Potentially the masterpiece, to become the day I've dreamed,
But until this moment, the ink remains unused,
White replaced by white, and the pen still lies unmoved.
But then came my inspiration, a muse, so to speak,
The lonely camera girl, snapping photos of the week.
Picturesque, she was, like a fashion model scene,
But too sincere and caring, to be a beauty queen.
A simple conversation between her and I,
Seemingly the strangest incentive,
But behind the visionary image of the eye,
There's more to this missionary motive.
'Cause the pictures have been taken,
The film developed, sorted to themes,
And the polaroids are now shaking,
To reveal you, of who I dream.
So let my words be as so sweet,
Like peaches ripened from these saccharine roots,
And you as my inspiration,
To rid the pits from your heavenly fruit.
~May your darkest nights give birth to your brightest days~
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morelikelyrics
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2004-04-09 16:24:37]
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Re: Pictured Inspiration
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:01:06 PM AEST
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| What a beautiful write. WOW! I'm a little lost for words. I don't know what to say. You have done an excellent job. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Pictured Inspiration
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 11:28:39 PM AEST
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| you take away everyone's words away, and their breath, and their sense of time. are you a superniceawesomeasianvillain in disguise? or..something? |
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Re: Pictured Inspiration
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by AspenGlow on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 08:34:57 AM AEST
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| We often see those on a pilar, and then the feet of clay, wonderful to know the two visions fit the same dream. Awesome write. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Pictured Inspiration
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 06:08:33 AM AEST
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Very good work!
I too like the part about the beauty queen.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Pictured Inspiration
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by arden on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 04:21:26 PM AEST
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this was just amazing. so beautiful and sweet.
im at a loss for words. just wow.
wonderfully done, you have a great talent. keep it up.
Arden |
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Re: Pictured Inspiration
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:48:17 PM AEST
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Wow...thats all i can conjure up...just wow... If only someone could write that of me... all would be perfect. You are a painter of words, More. Please never stop sharing.
Lindsey |
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Re: Pictured Inspiration
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:23:39 PM AEST
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| oh how beautiful, love the images and feelings i get reading this:) hugs n' love nessa |
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