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As I walk by the sea...
Contributed by
GeorgeJamesDelgado
on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 04:04:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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I feel His Creation watching me!
I feel the ocean's mist kiss my face,
like the touch of soft lace.
The pace of my walk is slow, as if
my feet don't know where to go.
The beach seems miles long, but its
siren song pulls me on and on.
Oh the happiness that fills me on
the soft sand, and the sun's rays bake
me, slowly.
This is my place of solitude; I have
gratitude in sharing His space!
Don't let it melt away because, I want
to stay, in this place!
Oh yes, always; always!
Copyright ©
GeorgeJamesDelgado
... [
2004-04-09 16:04:00]
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Re: As I walk by the sea...
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by kidpoet_213 on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 04:43:11 PM AEST
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I loved it! It's go a natural rhythm... the way that it's written... good write...
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Re: As I walk by the sea...
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by Elena on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:30:04 PM AEST
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A peaceful and radiant poem.
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