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Just the other day

Contributed by discantbelife on Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 03:31:06 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



This was just the other day,
When the abortion was the
Answer that they would say.
So i sat there and i cried,
But no one heard me.

I prayed and prayed, and kept begging God
Please God don't take my baby away,
All of this just happened the other day.

I can't eat,
I'm really starting to hate myself
I can't think
I'm really starting to hate myself
I can't breathe, don't want to beathe
I'm really starting to hate myself.

I questioned suicide and maybe that
Would be the way, but i know i would
Never get to see God or my baby's face.
So i just try to hurt myself,
Trying to take the pain away.
God knows i'm dying,
Nothing is helping, not even the crying.

God, I took my baby away, and all this just
Happened to other day.
I'm so tored trying to find myself,
This is the most horrible pain,
Knowing that i lost my baby in vain.
God i'm begging you to take me away,
Just so i can see my baby's face.
I just want to hold her, and feel her so deep in my arms, love her and all her baby charm.

This was just the other day,
When i felt abortion was the only way





Copyright © discantbelife ... [ 2004-04-09 15:31:06]
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Re: Just the other day (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 04:06:32 PM AEST
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that is an amazing write...it made me so sad, and i could feel the pain inside of me...if i was a crying person it would have made me cry, or if i had been thru that i would have bawled...

*hugs*

stay strong, that was an amazing write. Keep it up.


Re: Just the other day (User Rating: 1 )
by MIZZ_SIMMONS on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 04:21:06 PM AEST
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I can fully relate to your poem. I know how hard it is to go through abortion. At first you feel there is no way out but to get an abortion then when it's all done u feel like dying. I had my abortion done not to long ago and I hate my self for it . I hope things get better for you in life and you become stronger as you go. PRAY.

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