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Its nice
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 12:11:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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It flows so peacefully,
Its nice so neurotically,
I feel on fire,
I feel on fire,
I feel on fire
And its nice
I sit in my desolate room,
Feeling like a real man,
A knife sitting in my hand,
So gracefully I swoop,
Swoop apon my flesh
And its nice
And its nice
And its nice
Droplets begin to appear,
Overwhelming every fear,
Emotions so hard to explain,
Because they are drained,
It feels so great,
It feels so great,
And its nice
And its nice
And its nice
***** all these feelings,
Let them bleed,
Lose all this feeling,
Beyond sight
Mutilation
Mutilation
Mutilation
Beyond sight
And its nice
And its nice
And its nice
I guess I'm Psychotic
But I'm not really sure,
But I'm quite sure you'll tell me,
When I'm dead in your arms,
How many times
How many times have you
Found out about the truth
Is it a phase
All these raging hormones
What the ***** do you know
Who the hell am I
All I can do is feel this pain
All I can do is feel this pain
All I can do is feel this pain
Again and again
Again and again
And its nice
And its nice
And its nice
And I dont care
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
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2004-04-09 12:11:21]
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Re: Its nice
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by Alli on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 12:24:36 PM AEST
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| This is a very well written poem, it hits very close to home for me, I've known the comfort of the blade, and this poem really captures feelings and emotions not many people can truly understand. Beautifully dark. |
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Re: Its nice
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by fallensilence on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:23:28 PM AEST
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| i guess the best description of this poem was left by the last person. its beautifully dark. i think that says it all. -david |
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Re: Its nice
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 10:53:52 AM AEST
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| this is very poweful. i love it! i know you're pain. it feels so good... |
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