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My Best Friend Tay
Contributed by
face-in-the-crowd
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Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 09:45:31 AM in AEST
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Like a knife that was stabbed
Right into my heart,
Like somebody took it
And ripped it apart.
My eyes start to water
And I start to cry
I shout out to God,
Don't let her die!
Hold her in your arms
And don't let go,
But if she slips I'll always know
That you loved and cared for
My best friend Tay
And I'll be able to see her again someday.
Father in Heaven,
Listen to me pray:
Please watch over
My best friend Tay
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Re: My Best Friend Tay
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:21:42 AM AEST
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| A beautiful write, it brought a tear to my eye. |
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Re: My Best Friend Tay
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by Stitch on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 11:28:22 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful testament as well as a lovely poem. You have expressed your emotions well.
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Re: My Best Friend Tay
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by Sweetpoptartz07 on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:27:25 PM AEST
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| Wow im sorry that u lost her!!!! ::TeaRs::..Im here if u ever wanat to talk...this is a good write though i ilke how u put all ur emotions intto it it flowed very nicely!!!! :-)Great JoB |
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