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The Senses Also Dream
Contributed by
spike
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Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 09:15:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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(Lover's Flight)
I am not blind
But surely I am more than blind,
For I see in your gaze
Glimpses of warmth and laughter,
Sowing future days.
I am not deaf
But am I not more than deaf?
For I hear in your voice
Silken possibilities,
To make the soul rejoice.
And no, I am not dumb
But wish I had no voice,
When my words stumble over familiar terrain
Like a cripple learning to walk again.
For a short time, though
I blossomed in your light,
And sheared the sky on wings of pure delight.
Have sympathy for Homo Imaginatio
Imagining relationships
At end or start,
Tightly coiled between head and heart.
Copyright ©
spike
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2004-04-09 09:15:54]
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Re: The Senses Also Dream
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 09:32:33 AM AEST
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| Captivating write, I like the way you were able to turn a sad topic into a truly awesome write. |
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Re: The Senses Also Dream
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by Justalady on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:38:31 AM AEST
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| Gentle, yet strong. A softness yet the harsh reality of love and life . I find it beautiful to read but touches my heart in understanding ways. June |
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Re: The Senses Also Dream
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by fallensilence on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:39:58 AM AEST
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| very well written quite a captivating right. -david |
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Re: The Senses Also Dream
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 03:50:14 PM AEST
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Outstanding write my friend
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: The Senses Also Dream
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 04:24:02 PM AEST
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Oh my spike, this was amazing. And there ya go again
writing all my emotions down on paper. This was nothing
short of magnificent. A cleverly mastered and illustrated
write about a subject most of us are all too familiar with.
(But look at the work it inspires...)
Great job, my friend!
~B
*who is really glad she decided to sift through the back catalogue...lol* |
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Re: The Senses Also Dream
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by Lionel on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 09:12:45 AM AEST
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| Very good. |
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