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16th Year
Contributed by
bitson_2005
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Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 08:10:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It's finally time to find a mate to makes that wonderful perfect first date.
It's time to survive that wicked first drive, that leaves you alone away from home.
Your parents continue that boring talk that makes you just wnat to get up and walk.
And when all is done and you think you've won, you won't remember the year very clear.
Don't let people pump you up for this not so awsome jump.
In fact I am you slowest year, I'm worse than drinking a keg of beer.
I will be your least of fears, I am your 16th year.
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Re: 16th Year
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by sunraybutterfly on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 09:02:52 AM AEST
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| I like this although it has been ten years since my 16th year i think that everyone can remember what it is like to enter that changing year - very passionate well done |
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Re: 16th Year
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 09:36:20 AM AEST
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| Lol, very true. I'm 16 and still trying to find the "sweet" part of it. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. |
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Re: 16th Year
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by face-in-the-crowd on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 09:52:23 AM AEST
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| Wow, great poem! My sister just turned 16, and now that I think about it, I don't think she's having too much fun either. Take Care! |
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Re: 16th Year
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:06:26 AM AEST
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| Well done ..Awww, sweet 16, the beginning of many first. |
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