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www.CRaYoLa.com
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
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Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 06:44:23 AM in AEST
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insomniac
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Shout on a bed of blue and gold
Turquoise amber’s you grasp and hold
The colors fantastic in red and white
Close enough in beauty that I lose all sight.
A cool green or bright yellow
The depth you hold makes you feel so shallow
Pink, purple, orange, baby blue
Every where you look a different hue.
Shine of maroon and sea foam green
The most amazing colors I've ever seen
Every shade of every color and style
Makes a life so much more worthwhile.
Copyright ©
strange_lindsey
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2004-04-09 06:44:23]
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Re: www.CRaYoLa.com
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 07:01:56 AM AEST
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Your right! the colours give great imagery loved the title as well.
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by bernard on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 08:04:22 AM AEST
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Good imagination.
Nice job.
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:17:42 AM AEST
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| love it... |
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by dolly_dagger on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 02:37:37 PM AEST
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this is so cool. ive been looking 4 a way 2 express how much i love colour and how much it means 2. thank u 4 sharing
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 01:08:57 AM AEST
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| ahh, lindsey, those colours of your imagination are vividly vibrant and show your beautiful soul, keep writing, let them forever blend, hugs n' love nessa |
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by mountainhigh on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:28:08 AM AEST
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One thought came to mind, the openning of a new boc of Crayola crayons, the sweet smell of the new and brilliant colors, and the images of the beautiful ways they will mix on the paper.
Thank you for this reminder. |
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by nauphragus on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 04:26:07 AM AEST
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This is so colourful :-)
Great one. |
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by Thivanka on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 06:00:52 AM AEST
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| So nice. |
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by Coaster on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 04:28:43 PM AEST
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Liked the imagry a lot! I like the last two lines the most out of all the lines in this poem. I'm looking forward to read more of your writes.
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by arden on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 05:40:49 PM AEST
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oh this was just simply beautiful. i loved this! just amazing. great job.
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by forever_lonely on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 06:32:26 PM AEST
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Painted my thoughts with a wash of colour, your right this has amazing imagery, i really enjoyed it
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