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You've Reallly Hurt Me!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 05:36:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Now i know, you don't like me,
you've rusted my illution,
burnt my emotion,
because you kept me going!
and now i feel dropped,
from my fantasy land,
and i'm faced with solid reality!
i just feel so sad.
i thought you cared,
i hope you still do,
but i'm to twisted now,
to understand more truth!
it was your brother that told me,
and i don't think he'd lie.
i just want you to hold me,
and say it's alright...
but i know you don't like me,
i wanted it to go far!
but it hasn't, and i'm frozen,
because you're the way that you ARE!!
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deathdrop
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2004-04-09 05:36:58]
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Re: You've Reallly Hurt Me!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 06:56:17 AM AEST
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that was powerful a great way to let your emotions out well done.
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Re: You've Reallly Hurt Me!
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 07:06:08 AM AEST
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Agree's 100% with wildejohnny ..Good Way To Let Your Emotions Out...I Wished I Could But I Keep Them All Bottled Up Inside...
I Write Love Poems To Keep My Mind Off The Bad Things I Bottle Up Inside Of Me...Good Write...
********LoVe**AnGeL*********
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Re: You've Reallly Hurt Me!
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by luckycharm on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 04:23:16 PM AEST
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| This poem is good. I know how u feel, and I know it hurts in the heart. Hang in there for me.-luckycharm. |
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