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moonfish
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 02:00:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
mythology
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For a dreamer,
night's the only time of day.
~Movie Newsies~
Webfairy
oh, what a wretched full moon's sigh
upon darkened misty pastures nigh,
~*~
inside writing by candle's witticism
like dear dali's artistic surrealism,
~*~
stars they bless for near exhaustion
rendered waterways desirous caution,
~*~
all highminded sentiment vanquished
expressing composition of moonfish.
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Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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Re: moonfish
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by arden on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 02:06:43 AM AEST
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oh this is awesome! i loved it. short but just amazing. so good just wow. wonderfully done.
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Re: moonfish
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 02:10:31 AM AEST
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Sighs and drifts into a dream world......
Roses at your feet
Larry |
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by silent on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 02:15:46 AM AEST
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Your words speak with a strange tone, ;)
I love the second stanza, that was brilliantly written. Different for sure but still a poem worthy of 5 stars.
Silent |
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Re: moonfish
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 02:23:18 AM AEST
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Ahhh Totally Awesome Write :-) Job Well Done....I Loved It.....
You Deserve Those 5 Stars...Excellent Poem....
********LoVe**AnGeL********
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Re: moonfish
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 02:28:44 AM AEST
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Loved this grrlfriend.... good to see ya again..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: moonfish
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 02:33:04 AM AEST
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very awesome poem.. I really enjoyed reading it..
Peace and hope
JENNA |
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Re: moonfish
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by blueheart on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 06:16:48 AM AEST
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| Dreamy. Like you said its not your usual style but wonderfully written nevertheless. |
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Re: moonfish
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 06:18:13 AM AEST
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what a wonderful mind you have! awesome.
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Re: moonfish
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by Kie on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 03:31:40 PM AEST
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So peaceful and surreal. Filled with beauty and your unique way of making poetry come to life inside my mind.
I am glad to see you posting again.
Post more!
Your forever fan..
Kie |
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Re: moonfish
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by yellow_sundragon on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 11:53:00 PM AEST
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I like this differentness..... it's good.... but, well, different... that's all. But I'm digging it.
*J* |
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Re: moonfish
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:41:51 PM AEST
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| Nessa, *hugs*. How have ya been? I loved this. I think Monty Python is hilarious. Great job. *S* Cynthia |
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by emystar on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 11:55:39 PM AEST
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Wow girl,
U r so creative.
great job.
luv, huggs, moonfish,
emy |
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Re: moonfish
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:22:41 PM AEST
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Nessa that was great :) I giggled it made me feel like a little girl again. Haha. Thank you for sharing
Lindsey |
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Re: moonfish
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 11:30:54 PM AEST
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| This is definitely a unique and artistic write, reading it is like plunging into a fantasy realm that you don't want to leave. Also I love the mention of Dali, he was an incredible painter. |
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Re: moonfish
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by venkat on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 02:55:38 AM AEST
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| Amazing write..venkat |
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Re: moonfish
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by Merry on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:34:21 PM AEST
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shaking things up eh Nessa? excellent write - love the reference to Dali - sometimes being a poet does put one in a surreal place and the nicest things happen -
hugs
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 08:52:49 PM AEST
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Awww, this was so beautiful and peaceful *smiles dreamily*. . . I liked it a lot. Shame on me for forsaking your poetry for so long . . . and clearly I see here just what I've been missing! Beautifully done.
--Nora |
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Re: moonfish
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:25:07 PM AEST
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| different is good :) |
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