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The Flames
Contributed by
ItsRayningTonite
on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:46:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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As I watch it burn
The flames devouring it
I feel you leave my body
Every sweet moment once shared
Is gone into the pit of the fire
Every promise that you've made and broken
Is now within the blazing ashes
As this moment is consumed
My love for you goes with it
What held me captive
What left me beguiled
Every feeling I had for you
Is now lost into the flames
The picture, My love
Is gone
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2004-04-09 01:46:07]
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Re: The Flames
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 02:35:24 AM AEST
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wow this was so sad but yet so amazing! you can feel the letting go of the love which is good to let go of things that just are not awesome write!!
peace and hope
JENNA |
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Re: The Flames
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by corrupted_minds on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 03:02:01 AM AEST
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welldone love it i had some of the same feelings as i can relate. keep up the good work
woei queen |
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