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ONE BIG PHONEY
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:32:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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You’re just a big phoney,
You lied right from the start,
When we kissed that first time,
You told me I had your heart,
Then you left without a word,
I heard it from a friend,
My life started to crumble,
And now it is to end,
Daddy’s gun would do me well,
Up against my head,
I wont haunt you any more,
When I am past dead,
Without you I am empty,
Dead already I may be,
I want you to know this,
And for you to see,
Your blood tainted hands,
Lead me to demise,
You weren’t there to see my end,
Or hear my lonely cries.
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2004-04-09 01:32:06]
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Re: ONE BIG PHONEY
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by little_genna on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 05:26:05 AM AEST
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this may be dodgy as you seem to think but it is a good poem nonetheless. you have conveyed the feelings in this poem perfectly. thank you for sharing.
love and hugs
XgenX |
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Re: ONE BIG PHONEY
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 04:48:44 PM AEST
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I liked the end of this very well done and very descriptive. What do u mean by 'bad one'? I thought it was quite good.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: ONE BIG PHONEY
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by Dizza_13 on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 09:41:57 PM AEST
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| Another great poem. Not at all bad, (maybe bad for you but if i wrote it, it would be one of my best lol) |
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