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Raping the Light
Contributed by
silent
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Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 12:43:49 AM in AEST
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I bear a torch without batteries
A beautiful, lifeless torch
See how it reflects in the night
So alluring, seductive
Finding power, giving it to me
This torch now shines, finally a voice
But the voice is inside
Never escaping
Always
Raping the light.....
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2004-04-09 00:43:49]
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Re: Raping the Light
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by MorbidMongrel on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 12:47:19 AM AEST
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| I love your description and imagery in this poem...great write! |
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Re: Raping the Light
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:10:58 AM AEST
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that was such a lateral thought well done.
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Re: Raping the Light
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:30:47 AM AEST
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| Such a sad and beautiful write, I loved the allusion to a torch. |
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Re: Raping the Light
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by emystar on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:36:45 AM AEST
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Very, very, very deep!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Raping the Light
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 02:07:11 AM AEST
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| i completely identify, excellent poem:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Raping the Light
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 06:00:23 AM AEST
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Great Little Write... Like The Imagery In This Poem :-)
********LoVe**AnGeL*********
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Re: Raping the Light
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by blueheart on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 06:35:15 AM AEST
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| The poem is basking in beauty. Lovely write. |
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Re: Raping the Light
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by Kie on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 03:21:24 PM AEST
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Short and very well written.
What an imaginative mind you have.
Awesome... Kie |
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Re: Raping the Light
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:43:55 PM AEST
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*shiver* Ohhh gave me chills, i dont know why but that was awesome... i like ti when poems make me think and especially when they affect me so much something happens to my body. phenominal write :)
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Re: Raping the Light
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:55:49 PM AEST
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Wow. Quite a twist in these few short lines. You think I jump start your imagination? This is fascinating.
Stitch |
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