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Please just let me die
Contributed by
silent
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Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:33:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Crumbling all around
Tears fall slowly from the eyes of my soul
A bloodied moon whispers its haunting gaze
While shadows fill a mind so dark
Holding this sweet blade so close to my weeping heart
I pray to an unexistant god that i find
Comfort in steel so cold
Sitting here on the brink of no return
Savouring the moment, how good it would feel to know no pain
The novelty of life has worn off long ago
Please someone help me, for i am falling into the abyss
Craving like the air i breathe, that deep sadness i miss
I hate life, for i want out
Instead my tortured soul just sits and shouts
Release me now, take me from this earth
Contemplating, when not how
I have no-more strength left
Let me go now, please god, just let me die
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2004-04-08 21:33:05]
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Re: Please just let me die
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:37:13 PM AEST
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Amazing write. I don't know if you really feel this way, but if you do, I have been there and back. Praying you will find your way back, too.
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Re: Please just let me die
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 10:00:19 PM AEST
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Oh Man This Touches My Heart For I Feel Just Like This Right Now...
"Release Me Now,Take Me From This Earth Contemplating,When Not How
I Have No-More Strength Left Let Me Go Now,Please God Just Let Me Die."
This Is Exactally How I Feel..Good Write..
********LoVe**AnGeL********
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Re: Please just let me die
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 10:46:28 PM AEST
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WOW... you've captured how i feel now so perfectly... this is beautiful and utterly captivating.
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Re: Please just let me die
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by arden on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 11:05:52 PM AEST
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very sad write. nicely written. you have wonderful talent. keep writing cuz man you rock.
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Re: Please just let me die
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by katyqueen35 on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 12:33:24 AM AEST
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so sad.
i love it though.
great write. |
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Re: Please just let me die
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by Kie on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 03:26:37 PM AEST
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| From the first stanza on I was enthralled with this poem. Dark and sad, reflective and awesome to read... Kie |
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Re: Please just let me die
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:52:10 PM AEST
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From start to finish this left me in complete AWE. You are phenominal. I would love to sit and pick your brain one day. Very sad though, I would miss out on your fantastic words.
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Re: Please just let me die
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 11:04:08 AM AEST
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aww this is so sad.. i like it though, it has a great flow and is perfect in describing the loneliness, the emptiness that depression brings.. good stuff :)
charlotte x_x_x |
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