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Release me
Contributed by
luckycharm
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Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 07:50:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My eyes are watery,
Because of the things I heard,
Come out of your mouth,
And I seem to let it,
All get to me,
And it hurts my emotions,
I look into your eyes,
And I see no tears,
Sheding down your own face,
It just kills me so bad,
You said u don't wan't my love,
So just release me
I think about how I was,
Always in your world,
But maybe I was thinking,
About that for myself,
About u,
I sit and daydream sometimes,
I even remember how u looked at me,
And I begin to feel like,
I'm gonna die,
Cause I cry on my pillow,
And my tears are a ocean,
That leads to u,
You said u don't need me,
So just release me
I wish I could see u,
Once again,
But my heart,
Can never mend,
Without u here,
To comfort me,
In my coldest nights,
Do you remember who I am?,
I was the one who loved u,
The one who trusted u,
And the one who never got u,
Out of my sight,
So if u don't really care about,
This girl that has loved u,
Just release me
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Re: Release me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:11:36 PM AEST
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| That was filled with lots of emotion and very well writen, I liked it lots. Good job. |
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Re: Release me
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by Kie on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:14:34 PM AEST
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This brought tears to my eyes and hit me straight in my heart.
Very powerful poem.
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Re: Release me
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by silent on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:38:00 PM AEST
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A deep poem being trapped in your mind, very sad. I loved this one, speaks volumes of truth and written from the heart, very powerful.
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Re: Release me
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by katyqueen35 on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 12:35:51 AM AEST
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I like it alot.
so well written. |
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Re: Release me
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 01:11:47 PM AEST
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Wow Pam, its scary how much I relate to this. I love your style and it flows very well. Beautiful.
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