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Drops Of Reign
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 07:24:41 PM in AEST
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Earth Escapes to flood my senses
Smells of tingling ancient calm
Clouds have thickly come unnoticed
As the trees turn up their palms
Now I'm eager, my breath's baited
I can't sit for it's too long
Since my heart could pitter-patter
As the raindrops sing my song
~*~Chorus~*~
Release my rhythm in the thunder
Lightning dance with me again
Wind sing harmony from under
My melody and rain must blend
*~*~*~*~*~*
Tempo quickens with my heartbeat
Healing me with such a thrill
Puddles slowly fill with chaos
Overflowing with my pill
Only dreams and memories
Seep into my soul and skin
Droplets rid me of the heartache
Trickling my song from within
{Chorus}
Heaven's opened torrents blazing
I am free and pure with bliss
Melting down to stain my face are
Angelic cloud's most tender kiss
God extends his sunlit fingers
Rainbows paint my hopeful art
The storm is over until next time
When rain drops lyrics of my heart
{Chorus Twice}
Peaceful confident and beaming
Ready to let someone in
Reassured by easy laughter
Second chance to re-begin
A lingering dampness of infusion
Energized much like rebirth
Rich and heavy smells of freedom
Telltale signs of rainfall's worth
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liquidsunshine
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Re: Drops Of Reign
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by Kie on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:07:04 PM AEST
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| This was beautiful. Just incredible. I read it twice and found myself in awe of how well it sounds to just read. I commend you on this one... Kie |
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Re: Drops Of Reign
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:42:51 PM AEST
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I LOVE this! LiquidSUNSHINE loves the rain. This is wonderful. So many, many delightful and rich lines. I am impressed!
Stitch |
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Re: Drops Of Reign
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 06:38:03 PM AEST
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Good job!
I'm a lover of the rain too. It's such a beautiful thing. I haven't written about it in particular, but I think at least a good half of my poems are in a setting with rain or mist...
I love it.
Keep writing!
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Re: Drops Of Reign
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by bernard on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 09:07:43 AM AEST
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I have just read this delightful poem. You have the ability to rhyme and write what I am sure would make a good song. Try sending this to a songwriter you never know your luck. By the way I too would have liked to become a florist but in my days boys were considered sissy's if they had anthing to do with Flowers. Good luck with the writing.
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Re: Drops Of Reign
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 04:55:32 PM AEST
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Lightning does it for me!
A lingering dampness of infusion
Energized much like rebirth
Rich and heavy smells of freedom
Telltale signs of rainfall's worth
I could smell the freshness great write.
wildej.
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Re: Drops Of Reign
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by shelby on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:11:16 PM AEST
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you have a flare for this great job
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Re: Drops Of Reign
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by eatfresh22 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 04:40:40 PM AEST
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This was so great! I could feel the raindrops and hear the melodies. You have such a musical way of writing....but that would only make sense. *smile* And I love the rain also. Encore yourself there, chica!
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