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I wish
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 06:22:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I wish that I had saw you,
Standing in the road,
Waiting for me all your life,
With the love you never showed,
I wish you were here now,
To grope and hold my hand,
You left this world because of me,
This thought I cannot stand,
I wish I healed your pain,
And nestled you in my arms,
Kept you close by my heart,
Away from all life’s harms,
I wish I had told you,
How much you meant to me,
Told the world your mine to keep,
The one to set you free,
I wish that I had noticed,
Our silent, secret love,
Too late had I found this,
And now you’re in heaven above,
I wish you hadn’t spilt your blood,
In order to cure your pain,
And now that all has wrong again,
I’m going to do the same.
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Re: I wish
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 06:34:39 PM AEST
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| Very sad and emotional. A very good write. |
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Re: I wish
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:39:58 PM AEST
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its very good. emotional, describtive. says alot. i've been through something similiar, and it sucked. i will never forget it. tell you all about it sometime. but great poem.
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Re: I wish
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:40:11 PM AEST
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its very good. emotional, describtive. says alot. i've been through something similiar, and it sucked. i will never forget it. tell you all about it sometime. but great poem.
Auryn |
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Re: I wish
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:44:38 PM AEST
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| opps. didn't mean to double post that. sorry... |
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Re: I wish
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by Dizza_13 on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 09:38:32 PM AEST
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Sad, but touching 2. You should write more poems like these, really good.
Dizza |
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