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Shadows In The Light
Contributed by
wordpoet
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Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 05:30:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Sitting in a darkened room I watch the shadows fall,
As a candle flickers languidly, dark movements on the wall,
Your face is framed in midnight’s mask, light resting on one cheek,
And shapes a vision of desire, you are the one I seek.
I listen raptly to your voice, the way it pulls me near,
The dulcet tones, a sweet caress, breaking through my fear,
Unconsciously I lean to you, this moment takes my breath,
The innocence that once was ours now has seen its death.
Anticipation rears its head, in hope it is full blown,
As I wait for you to feel it too and make your feelings known,
Each moment now eternity, each breath an endless flow,
‘Til the slightest parting of your lips lets your feelings show.
Drawing near I am aflame with passion and desire,
Knowing that you are the one who sets my soul on fire,
And as you close the distance to place your lips on mine,
The velvet shadows in the light romantically entwine.
By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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Re: Shadows In The Light
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 05:45:07 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem, Doug...good to see you posting again..
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Re: Shadows In The Light
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by Kie on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 07:43:11 PM AEST
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Very romantic, soft, beautiful and glorious to read. Well done..
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Re: Shadows In The Light
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:08:35 AM AEST
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I have missed the absolute perfection of your poetry my friend. The depth of emotion, the style with which you write........ This is romance at its best and I tip my hat to ya.
Very well done as always
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Re: Shadows In The Light
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:04:19 PM AEST
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| What a beautiful write Doug. A very heart touching write. I liked it. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Shadows In The Light
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by Drive_By on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:22:33 PM AEST
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| Hmmmmm. Isn't this a bit inappropriate for young eyes and minds? |
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Re: Shadows In The Light
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 05:22:58 PM AEST
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| Nice poem, splendidly written. I hope my first kiss is like that. |
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Re: Shadows In The Light
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by arden on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:59:16 PM AEST
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so beautiful and so romantic.
you capture the feel and scane of a first kiss so well. i loved the deep emotion imagry.
wonderful, amazing poem.
loved it.
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