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I will run to you
Contributed by
ICEYFLAMES
on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 04:10:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I've been waiting for this for so long
My heart has beared
My love is strong.
Nightly caresses, daily kisses
I can't belive thats what im missing
Once it's here it's here to stay
Jus' wanna go and run away
To be close to love than far from it
I don't care if the earth will plumet
As long as I get that
one special kiss
I'll be ready , to sease to exist
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ICEYFLAMES
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2004-04-08 16:10:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I will run to you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Necromant on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 04:14:45 PM AEST (User
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Ah what a loved filled poem! What we do for love! Great write!
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Re: I will run to you
(User Rating: 1 ) by setting_in_the_sun on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:48:54 PM AEST (User
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I like this write, 'iceyflames' I haven't read a peice like this before, so it's cool. Always looking for something new n unique, juss awesome, juss to help you out a little the 's' in 'sease' should be a 'c' 'cease' but I can't talk I always spell things wrong, great write, keep it up!
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Re: I will run to you
(User Rating: 1 ) by valek on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:05:15 PM AEST (User
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very nice poem....
little spell check couldnt hurt ya! lol
none the less i enjoyed it, very emotion filled and i can relate to it alot
one love, one destiny,
Zac |
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Re: I will run to you
(User Rating: 1 ) by NirvanaLotus on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:02:32 PM AEST (User
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i like your romance poems, you can tell that you really feel it, and you can tell your love and passion is innocent, that no one has hurt you horribly in the more deeper relationships. and im glad for that. you are a wonderful poet and i hope your innocence of heart break doesnt fade |
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