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thirteenth
Contributed by
viola
on
Wednesday, 25th September 2002 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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I saw a cat as black as death-
with eyes as green as mine,
sitting licking razor teeth.
What thoughts invade it's mind...
"does she believe in omens'
in superstitious signs.
That woman walking in my path
with eyes as green as mine."
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2002-09-25 06:30:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: thirteenth
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lia on
Wednesday, 25th September 2002 @ 06:59:10 AM AEST (User
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This has a neat little twist to it |
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Re: thirteenth
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamsOfDark on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 07:18:14 AM AEST (User
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I really liked this. It was very cute and had an unexpected twist... a neat perspective. |
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Re: thirteenth
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 06:22:53 AM AEST (User
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Great write! Love this. |
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