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trying love
Contributed by
viola
on
Wednesday, 25th September 2002 @ 06:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I cried a river that drowned your soul,
and in my mind it's you I hold.
Without regret we make amends
to become lovers, remain friends.
Yet, down the line I take regret,
kiss it's mouth, show it depth.
My heart releases hold once more,
and you and I are as before.
We lay in clouds as black as tears,
to try our love for another year.
Copyright ©
viola
... [
2002-09-25 06:20:00]
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Re: trying love
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by Lia on
Wednesday, 25th September 2002 @ 06:58:00 AM AEST
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| I hope it works....good write |
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Re: trying love
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by viola on
Wednesday, 25th September 2002 @ 10:45:56 PM AEST
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| thank you for not tearing it to shreds. I hide them away in fear. Guess I'm being a chicken. |
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Re: trying love
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 06:20:38 AM AEST
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| Just been reading some of your poetry and this one is beautiful ... I love the way you use your words. |
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