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It Figures
Contributed by
Alli
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Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 10:36:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I wonder what you think of when you look into my eyes
If you're searching for my soul, or looking for the lies
But I'm only me when you're not around
And my loudest of convictions escape with no sound
You'll see just a piece of a mind so complex
Do you want me to have your baby
Or do you just want the sex
I wish I could show you there's so much more
But you can't see through a closed bedroom door
I'm afraid I can't make things any clearer
I'm not the same person I see in the mirror
It may sound crazy, these things that I claim
To everyone else I always look the same
You're wise in insisting there's a lot more to me
A whole other side you've yet to see
But you'll never get to hear me in another tone
For I am only beautiful when I'm all alone.
2003
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Alli
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2004-04-08 10:36:18]
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Re: It Figures
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 10:45:00 AM AEST
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that was excellent a full 5 stars!
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Re: It Figures
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by ADreamWithinADream on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 10:48:36 AM AEST
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| That was really cool, god job ;) |
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Re: It Figures
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 10:57:16 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem. All the things we want to show to people, how we really are, but sometimes we just can't. Very recognizable.
Keep it going!
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Re: It Figures
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by Coaster on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:17:06 AM AEST
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I can tell it came from your heart. Loved the poem and I was kept interested from the title to the end of the poem. Thanks for posting this up and I look foward to reading more of your writes!
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