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Affinity
Contributed by
Clarity
on
Tuesday, 24th September 2002 @ 10:10:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You keep trying to say we’re wrong
Though your body screams we’re right
One hand’s pushing me away
While the other holds me tight
Your actions speak against the
Lies I’m struggling to believe
Your smile begging me to stay
Though your lips tell me to leave
We’re like the poles of two magnets
Likeness pushes us apart
Nature’s cruel law of life
That constantly breaks my heart
Your touch makes me turn around
When my hand is on the door
The laughter in the silence
Keeps me holding on for more
Every time I turn away
Thinking “us” is finally done
Affinity pulls us back
And we once again are one
Copyright ©
Clarity
... [
2002-09-24 22:10:00]
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Re: Affinity
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by Lia on
Tuesday, 24th September 2002 @ 11:43:42 PM AEST
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| Can't be too wrong if you keep heading back to each other :) |
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Re: Affinity
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by ginsdance on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 06:08:17 AM AEST
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You may not know when you wrote this, but this is a terrific write girl!!! And what Lia said was true, if you keep heading back for more, it can't be too wrong... ;) Great write!
Ginsdance |
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Re: Affinity
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by Tyes on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 10:21:00 PM AEST
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| Good work ! |
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Re: Affinity
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by Eastway on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 10:04:12 PM AEST
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| So true - a vicious circle of pain, the bitter, sweetness of love but we still can't live without it. Loved the way you set out the contradictions of a relationship - you are very talented. |
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Re: Affinity
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 07:55:48 AM AEST
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| How relationships can be so difficult, but you do have a good grasp. I just loved your writing and this wonderful poem. Keep up the wonderful work, this writing, and keep on smiling :) Ginette |
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Re: Affinity
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by nomad on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 06:28:17 PM AEST
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| This is a wonderful write, Clarity. I'm glad you changed your mind and decided to like poetry. You write it very well. Very passionate piece. |
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