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The Black Angel.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:49:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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she fly's, through the night.
sends her cries, spreading her spite!
sheding black images,
of far away lands,
she haunts every innocent child,
with nightmares on demand!
she screems to the atmosphere,
wanting to some to care,
knowing the truth of honestly,
that no one wants, more darkness to share!
that each is to their own,
of fear and hurt.
not many want to know of troubles and dirt.
but still she floats through her dungons echoing of hell!
knowing one day, someone will have secrets to tell...
that one day, she'll be free to rip!
and brake their shell!
and have fresh blood to sip.
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deathdrop
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2004-04-08 08:49:57]
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Re: The Black Angel.
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:55:21 AM AEST
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| Whoa, that's really really good for something that you came up with on the spur of the moment, I wish I could do that. |
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Re: The Black Angel.
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:08:46 AM AEST
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This was certainly worth reading! Haunting stuff, written down with a cutting sharpness!
Hur |
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Re: The Black Angel.
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by THUGPASSION on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 10:23:27 AM AEST
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| wow nice work 4 sumthin off da top of ur head |
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Re: The Black Angel.
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by Dark_Mistress on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 11:29:19 AM AEST
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Mwah ah ah, thank you for writing a poem about me.. lol.. :P
Wow, not bad for something off the top of your head =D !! |
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Re: The Black Angel.
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 06:03:29 PM AEST
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| thsi is great. very dark, haunting almost. great job for off the top of your head. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: The Black Angel.
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by lildrama04 on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 12:13:58 PM AEST
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| I really liked this poem it was really good it reminds me of who I really am. And how right now in my life I feel that I am that girl who is a very dark angel. But if you don't like what I have written in the past I am really sorry because those where from the heart and I know I may be mean but I'm not really that mean. |
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