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Til a poem's end
Contributed by
reilt
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Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:18:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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You are just paper
And pen...
Words, dreams, ideas,
Memories relived
Or a version of.
Stretching the imagination,
the reality,
Of a dead entity.
I like to build my thoughts around you still,
Write you inside out,
Back into my heart.
I like to give us life again
Even if it is
Til a poem's end!
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-04-08 08:18:39]
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Re: Til a poem's end
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:59:01 AM AEST
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| Wow. Interesting way of presenting lost memories in poetry, the first verse is especially great. Do you rock? Hell yeah ;) |
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Re: Til a poem's end
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:18:06 AM AEST
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Wonderful, deep and thought-provoking poem you've put here. Approaching poetry from an unexpected point of view.
I like it!
Hur |
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Re: Til a poem's end
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by Coaster on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 12:55:01 AM AEST
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Very interesting poem. Liked it a lot. Keep posting them up and I look foward to reading more of your stuff!
Ryan |
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