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With Malice Intent
Contributed by
STRaNGe_LiNDSeY
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Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 05:04:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Inject the epidemic into their veins
Hang them from the ceiling- arms and legs in chains
Beat them so bloody you cannot see a face
Hatred and bitterness- violently replaced.
Prescribe the wrong dose and sit back
Wait until they choke- then plan an attack
Give them a little of birth and demise
Wait for conscientiousness to gauge out their eyes
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Re: With Malice Intent
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 05:21:11 AM AEST
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| Gruesome imagery played to full effect....well done. You know what they say, sometimes what is perceived as psycho is actually genius ;) |
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Re: With Malice Intent
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by Spike on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 06:19:53 AM AEST
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| Wow! Strong feelings and raw delivery. Remind me not to get on your wrong side! |
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Re: With Malice Intent
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:32:52 AM AEST
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Psycho is okay by me! I'd love to see this happen to a few people i've come across in my life.
Great poem--makes me want to scream and break things!
Truly,
-Dan |
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Re: With Malice Intent
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by mountainhigh on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:43:02 AM AEST
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and the intent to be.......make one over just for me........one of perfection not to be shared....one who will not stray.
your poetry provokes such thoughts..thank you |
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