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PLaying with fire
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 02:15:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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You’re like playing with fire,
Or standing on ice,
Whenever you’re near,
I always look twice,
Your heaven on earth,
You light up my days,
You always make me smile,
In so many different ways,
When ever we hang out,
I try to let you know,
You’re the only thing I love,
And I know that I don’t show,
My love for you is secret,
No one knows it’s there,
If I was to tell you,
Would you even care?
It’s killing me from the inside,
How can I live like this?
Waiting for the first time,
In which that we would kiss.
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2004-04-08 02:15:41]
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Re: PLaying with fire
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:24:22 AM AEST
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Sweet and gentle with a sharp edge. Go on like this. Hope you get the love of your life!
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: PLaying with fire
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 03:44:43 PM AEST
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Very well written poem! Keep it up! Best wishes ;)
Anne :D |
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Re: PLaying with fire
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by Dizza_13 on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 09:34:36 PM AEST
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| Really, Really good loz. Shows lots of raw emotion. |
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