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Naturally Sour
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 01:12:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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In an oh-so-crystal glass, I know
you like your ketchup on ice.
And whilst, you sit, to avoid to stand
to annoy The Man;
so there you sit,
and here I stand
to make a stand,
to rhyme, OFFEND.
So in seventy-three years
(when wood will only serve
to beat those of seventy-two)
You say you may consider
adding nutmeg to your lemonade.
I was naturally sour
to the whole thing,
so I turned my purple lips to the north,
and continued applying shaving cream liberally to the cochlea in my left ear.
(those little hairs won't bother me again,
DO YOU HEAR?)
There's a ringing in the garden.
The bell peppers are ready,
so fill your head with cheese
and bake at 350^
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Re: Naturally Sour
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 01:21:08 AM AEST
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| I won't say I understood any of it. But I won't say it wasn't unique and interesting to read either. |
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Re: Naturally Sour
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 11:36:19 AM AEST
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lol what a wierd poem. You sound rather manic...
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Naturally Sour
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 12:06:28 PM AEST
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| hmmm, i like this but it is very strange...dont understand it, but still greta. *hugs* phil xxx |
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