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Thus, I was set free
Contributed by
Thivanka
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Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 12:56:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Thus, I was set free.
As she walks by the mottled glass,
I tilt ahead, to watch her pass;
Down the scourged road of Hamlin,
And through to the arms of her kin.
Never have I witnessed such beauty,
In a town soaked with enmity;
a lotus in a raucous pond,
Devoid of sterile bonds.
Golden strands of hair,
Floats through the vivid air,
As I sit and watch her grace,
Disperse before my comatose Face.
I watch her with elated zest,
Follows her pristine breath,
Devours the sight of salvation,
To inebriate my sour complications.
Her voice ring in my ears,
Like a tone recited for years;
Reposes caustically in my mind of woe,
A dove in a midst of war.
Copyright ©
Thivanka
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2004-04-08 00:56:53]
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Re: Thus, I was set free
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 01:47:44 AM AEST
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| I loved your word selection. Very deep and thought out well. |
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Re: Thus, I was set free
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by Remy on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 05:22:30 PM AEST
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killer writing style, i love your description makings.... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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