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Lies
Contributed by
Avarice_Riot
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Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:55:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Beautify me wth with lies, darling.
I saw the truth and it hurt too much
If all of actuality is this ugly
I'd rather breathe in delusions
So paint me a fake tableau
to distract my dying eyes
Sew me a quilt to cover what's real
to solidify my denial...
Beautify me with lies, darling.
You know it's all I desire
The blinding lights, they pierce me
But never give a reason for the pain
I crave for the shadows to obscure it all
Disconnect me from the facts
I wish I could hurt and not feel remorse
I want to live amongst deceit...
I long to be a ghost
I long to dwell in lies
Beautify me....
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Re: Lies
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 12:29:58 AM AEST
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i loved te different slant here very well done.
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 01:28:37 AM AEST
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| i sure loved the first line beautify me with lies darling. i really liekd the first verse. i enjoyed the poem in general. very true that. and you know its me, i aint just *****tin ya. i could have used these 2 minutes to do something worthless if i was. |
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by venkat on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 03:28:34 AM AEST
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| very strange way of expression..it is sharp and excellent...awesomly touches..venkat |
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Re: Lies
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by reilt on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 06:56:48 AM AEST
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| i really loved your poem...great write |
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Re: Lies
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:42:46 AM AEST
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Words of grief and despair... Sometimes your dreams are the best place to find shelter..even when you know you're dreaming.
Chillingly beautiful!
Hur |
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 03:39:09 PM AEST
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Ah wow I loved this poem! Very well written! Hmm I myself love to live in a lie can relate to this! Awesome write!
Anne :D |
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Re: Lies
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by Remy on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 05:13:14 PM AEST
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erg, haunting imagery in your words... creepy and poetic, stellar writing!! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Lies
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by arden on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:51:58 AM AEST
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i liked this.
very interesting. just so well written and full of emotion. just amazing. well done keep up the awesome work.
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Re: Lies
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by silent on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 09:28:48 AM AEST
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PERFECT, couldn't sum it up better myself, what a fantastic poem, that's why i live internally in darkness, where my truth lies hidden from the world. If this world is heaven i would rather live in hell. Brilliant.
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Re: Lies
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 02:14:43 AM AEST
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Beautifully written....tho I must confess..I'd rather hear the truth anyday.....no matter how painful...
Jenni |
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 03:14:58 AM AEST
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| Ave, another amazing poem. What can I say, you truly are a brilliant poet and deserve all due credit for your work. :) |
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by Baronhawk on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:37:27 AM AEST
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| Lies are beautiful indeed... I too long to swim in its comforting embrace.. but of what costs and of such consequence... anyway a haunting and lilting write. A slightly depressing vision but nice! ...perchance truth is of more ardent temper and a truer mirror. |
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:48:03 AM AEST
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No kiss tastes as sweet as the kiss of a lie.....
None is as bitter as that of the truth.
I definately loved this one and that ISNT a lie.
Roses
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by JennyFruFru on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 01:45:56 AM AEST
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| we live among so many lies its disgusting... i understnd ur viewpoint... and i much agree... the world is a ugly place nowadays |
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by Dina on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 12:45:23 AM AEST
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| What can I say more that what's already said, it is not just a perfect poem, but you are so true and undisguised. You don't need to be beautified, you are the most beautiful person on earth. |
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by alecfernadez on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 10:09:35 AM AEST
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| wow, such much dispair, pain and suffering told with such beauty and in such small verse, Incredible you really are a versitile powerful poet, probably one of the best I've ever come across |
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 11:47:23 AM AEST
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| i love this poem, everything about it. amazing write. *hugs* phil xxx |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:03:51 AM AEST
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Beautifully chilling.
Great poem.
5 stars. |
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by apollo on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 08:15:59 AM AEST
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this was awesome. lies do sometimes seem to make things better but in the end they end up making it worse. the way you put this into perspective was extraordinary, i must read it again. im going to read more of your writing because if it is anything like this, it will be truly amazing.
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by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:32:45 AM AEST
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Beautify me with lies, darling.
You know it's all I desire
yes...perfect...this is so poignant and beautiful...i am at a loss for words...wonderful... |
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Re: Lies
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by Spike on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 06:50:19 AM AEST
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Happy 100th! Sorry couldn't help myself - that 99 looked so, well..... incomplete.
Aside from adding to your reader tally, let me just add to the positive comments. A good write, and an enjoyable read, about a place and a state of mind we all visit, if not dream of inhabiting. Reality is the camera, delusion is the filter.
Now that's my kind of picture.
Spike. |
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:31:53 PM AEST
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| excellent write. original concept after reading so many poems about trying to get away from lies. =] |
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Re: Lies
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by Pink-Cherry on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 09:46:20 PM AEST
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| you have quite the assortment of poems, and all are wonderful! |
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