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The One
Contributed by
Piper
on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:43:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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When he met her, they became close friends before she was the one
He did not want to be in a relationship
She wanted to start something of complete newness
They became closer, he denied his feelings
He finally expressed what was on his mind
She understand his decision, but didn't understand why the long time
They finally joined together and she was the one
His past made him question his trust
He couldn't imagine commitment so trun away he must
Thus, his insecurities caused the divided
Even after admitting the wrong doing he had to much pride
Later they split ways after she was the one
He was alone again but this was his own decision
He deeply missed her but his days of compassion were done
Longing for, loving and wanting the one
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Piper
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2004-04-07 23:43:00]
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Re: The One
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by Remy on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 05:06:15 PM AEST
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oi vey, heart-wrenching... great writing thou! ;0)
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Re: The One
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:55:42 PM AEST
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Excellent! This shows great insight into the way human emotions can cause such sad situations. What a beautiful, but grievously flawed, nature we have, eh?
Keep writing!
Andrew |
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