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Just Give a Ear
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:13:30 PM in AEST
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"Is there Anyone out there?
Coz its like talking to Myself Up Here.
She stood on the ground Here,
and looked Up at the sky.
And began to Speak and Slowly turn round.
To check that she was Alone.
The World seemed , Perfectly Still.
"Hello up there, Are ya lisening."she said as she looked around once more.
" It's Me , Here on Earth Again .
Can you spend the time?"sobbing ,she said,
"My heart is spilling over
and Our Needs are Really Big.
With each passing day ."
She stood like many a Faithful Soldier and Waited for the Next Command.
Then burst out shouting,
" All Over Children are Crying and the Worlds in a mess!"
I confess we are a People who aren't prefect
By any means.
But For the sake of all thats Holy
How bout giving OTHERS some Rest."
The Sun is Shinning and the Rivers are full HERE
But hey, have You Looked Whats Going on
Over THERE,
People are thinking sad thoughts and doing sad things,
Its Pain , and Heart ache, Curses and Things.
If One wish could , Just Break it
I would make it -So that we all could Find Peace and just get Along
One way or the Other .
But Please, Dear Lord, Please
We need something QUICK."
Checking around again , she shrugged ,
Wiping the tears from her eyes .
Pulled her coat a little closer
and just walked away.
Whisper
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Re: Just Give a Ear
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:26:28 PM AEST
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This is sad but it's beautifull thoughts-n-prayers. You touched the throne and God will move.
Very good writing.
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Re: Just Give a Ear
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 12:21:20 AM AEST
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a sad but excellent write very well done.
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Re: Just Give a Ear
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 03:34:37 PM AEST
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Vivid sad poem! Written awesomely! Keep it up!
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Re: Just Give a Ear
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 02:13:38 AM AEST
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Oh my gosh, you are quite a word weaver. Not many touch me so deeply with words. Your imagery is very good. I have had this feeling and many discussions like this with HIM, but I must not be yelling loud enough. Maybe I don't have on the proper coat??? Nice work.
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