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Sold Out
Contributed by
ThePumpkinKing
on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 10:46:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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My life is not half-pleasing to You, The Creator
This is something that I have discovered
'Cause I've been caught conforming,
to this world of nothing
I've been running and falling
Been looking around and calling
But now I'm selling out to You,
I give You all that I do
So You set my soul on fire,
and take me up higher
You make all pain disappear,
and reduce me to tears
Been going no where fast,
but I'm living at last
'Cause I've sold out to you,
and You live in all that I do
Copyright ©
ThePumpkinKing
... [
2004-04-07 22:46:30] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Sold Out
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:17:04 PM AEST (User
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Very good write. It shows how God can reach down and touch hearts.
Keep up the good writing.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Sold Out
(User Rating: 1 ) by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:27:27 PM AEST (User
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Sold otu to God is the only way to be... Good poem like how it was expressed.
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Re: Sold Out
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:07:49 PM AEST (User
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This is beautiful and was wonderfully written. Keep you the great work, I look forward to reading more from you
Love 'n Hugs
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Re: Sold Out
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:01:00 PM AEST (User
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A moving poem of change and devotion.
It had an honest "here I am" ring to it, resonating humanities cries.
Kie |
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