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Once Upon A Cosmic Rhyme (part two)
Contributed by
rhymeandreason
on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 09:46:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Once upon a cosmic rhyme,
a mystic poet tried to pen a magic ode.
But a shifting of life's paradigm,
blocked this poet from the wordway road.
He still envisioned as before,
worlds unborn, and so much more.
Yet, words relating what mind saw,
and filled his spirit with such awe,
could not be found.
He could not run a single word to ground.
So he travled far, by day, by night.
Then he rested till, to rest was work.
Many things he tried to write.
But in his mind not one word did lurk.
Then he surrendered to the truth.
All he'd written was a gift.
His failed attempts, the glaring truth.
That formed the block he could not lift.
There astride wordway road.
There between poet and ode.
And with his aknowledgment,
the block was lifted.
His muse set loose a torrent gifted.
magical and great.
For poet who lay before his muse prostrate.
This signifying as his testement.
His awareness that he was merely instrument.
and agent of truth's love.
Really, when you think of it,
isn't that enough?
Once upon a cosmic rhyme.
Past shifting of life's paradigm.
Once more, a mystic poet
penned a magic ode.
with grattitude for the
blessing: To journey unimpeded down wordway road.
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rhymeandreason
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2004-04-07 21:46:58]
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Re: Once Upon A Cosmic Rhyme (part two)
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 11:36:05 PM AEST
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Ah, that magic pen..... I see you have embarked upon that journey....
Jenni |
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Re: Once Upon A Cosmic Rhyme (part two)
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 03:32:08 PM AEST
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Wow another awesome write! Keep it up!
Anne :D |
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Re: Once Upon A Cosmic Rhyme (part two)
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 03:31:58 AM AEST
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"His failed attempts, the glaring truth.
That formed the block he could not lift."
I much enjoyed this one. Very poetic. |
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